“Bluest Rains” Response

You can find the response following the poem

Bluest Rains (by Rebecca Chasteen)

I’ve waded too far in dark waters-
pinprick of light
flickers,
I stop fighting the undertow
and just float

why was I fighting so hard?
churning my legs
going no where
drinking salt
losing air

when I could have
just let go-
bluest rains
smooth over me,
best sunrise
I’ve even seen.

Cascade by Julie WalzCascade by Julie Walz

Calm Reflections by Julie WalzCalm Reflections by Julie Walz

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